今天下雨了(Today Is Rainy)
This afternoon,the sky was rain,this rain was very big,my classroom's glass was bad.Many students were very afraid.
Window out,had many hills,after rain,they were very beautiful and very clean!On the hills,had many falwors and a litter birds,they were cute.
I don't like rain at all,but I like after rain sky.
This afternoon,the sky was rain,this rain was very big,my classroom's glass was bad.Many students were very afraid.
Window out,had many hills,after rain,they were very beautiful and very clean!On the hills,had many falwors and a litter birds,they were cute.
I don't like rain at all,but I like after rain sky.
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