我的童年(My childhood)
作者:佚名 作文体裁:初中英语 标签: 我的童年 ood) 发表时间:2008-6-5 人气:
我的童年(My childhood)
 My childhood was happy with my mother’s love .In my young heart, my mother was strong and healthy and never got sick. She took me to the primary school and home every day. No matter when it’s rainy or windy. 
 But one day, after we got home from school, my mother went into the bedroom and stayed in bed. I didn’t know what had happened. I sat beside her , my mother said to me , “it doesn’t matter , mum only has a headache . I will be all right after a while.” Although mother said so, I found tears in her eyes because of pain, at that time I knew adults also got ill and cried. I decided I would take care of my mother from then on.
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