有趣的动物园(The funny zoo)
Zoo ----- animals’ family .
On Saturdays , I usually go to the zoo . It’s a lovely and funny zoo .
There are three tigers , six rabbits , five peacocks , some pigeons , some butterflies and a lot of monkeys in the zoo .
Look , the tigers are sleeping . They are so lazy . Next to the tigers , there’re six lovely rabbits . They are eating the carrots . The peacocks are so beautiful , I like their color , such as green , blue, and white . The white pigeons are eating the rice behind the apple trees . They are fat , but there is a thin one . Beside the apple trees , the butterflies are flying on the flowers . They are so beautiful and happy . Oh , dear ! The monkey in the blue cap is playing the swing . And the old monkey is climbing . Haha , that little monkey is dancing . The children are laughing .
They are all very funny . I like the animals . How about you ?
Zoo ----- animals’ family .
On Saturdays , I usually go to the zoo . It’s a lovely and funny zoo .
There are three tigers , six rabbits , five peacocks , some pigeons , some butterflies and a lot of monkeys in the zoo .
Look , the tigers are sleeping . They are so lazy . Next to the tigers , there’re six lovely rabbits . They are eating the carrots . The peacocks are so beautiful , I like their color , such as green , blue, and white . The white pigeons are eating the rice behind the apple trees . They are fat , but there is a thin one . Beside the apple trees , the butterflies are flying on the flowers . They are so beautiful and happy . Oh , dear ! The monkey in the blue cap is playing the swing . And the old monkey is climbing . Haha , that little monkey is dancing . The children are laughing .
They are all very funny . I like the animals . How about you ?
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