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My dailt life (我的一天)
作者:剧终 作文体裁:初中英语 关键词: day 记一天  发表时间:2008-11-8 人气:
【字号: | | 】【背景色 杏仁黄 秋叶褐 胭脂红 芥末绿 天蓝 雪青 灰 银河白(默认色) 】  
                               My daily life
  I usually get up at 6 a.m,wash and put on my school uniform, I have breakfat at 6:30 am. Then, my father drives me to school in his own car. I have four class in the morning .  
  At 12 a.m I return home by bus. I have lunch with my famliy at 12:30 am. Then I watch TV from 1 p.m to 1:45p.m Aftre thar I go to my school by bus .
  I have three class in the afternoon. At 5 p.m  I rutern home by bus  I have supper with parents.Next I go to my home and finish my homework. I always go to bed at 10p.m.
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