My Father
作者:天蓝色的彼岸 作文体裁:小学生英语 标签: 英语 发表时间:2008-7-17 人气:

    I have a hard- work fathe.He is very kind and healthy, He loves me very much.

He has a tall nose, two big eyes and short black hair. He’s not tall. But he is very smart.

He’s funny. He likes to do sports very much.I think his favourite colour is red. Because he has many red things. My father usually tells me: Failure is the mother of success.

He looks after me well. The weather has been cold, he calls me to put on the clothes.

He is a good father. I like to stay with my father.

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· Itissoboring.Youwillbehard-workinginEnglish. 
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