

it's summer.maggie and miffe swim in the lake.
they are happy. "I like summer ,"says maggie.
"why do you like summer?"asks miffe.
"because I can swim in the lake."
it's fall. miffe and maggie go hiking.
They eat a lot.
winter comes. miffe and maggie don't skate. They sleep.
sping comes. miffe and maggie wake up. Theyfiy kites."I like winter,"says miffe. "why do you like winter?"asks maggie."Because I can sleep a long time."
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我 的点评 打分:5 分 点评时间:2008-7-14 11:35:06
· 是不是有点太短了?
成功 的点评 打分:5 分 点评时间:2008-7-14 11:27:38
· 是一个寓言故事啊!好!
荔枝 的点评 打分:5 分 点评时间:2008-7-14 11:26:20
· 自己编的寓言故事,果真不错!


