

My name is Zou JiaCheng and my Englash name is Susan ,I like name very much . I am 15 years old . I am gril I think me is a little beautiful ,but have a littie shy . I like play basketball very much . My family have father , mother and brother . I think my father is very cute . He likes watching TV very much and my mother like sleep because she is very lazy. My bother wear glasses, he is 19 years old and he's very cool ,but he is good student .My bother name is Zou WeiXian . He like play basketball too.This is my family. I love them and they love me .
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719336909 的点评 打分:1 分 点评时间:2008-8-29 9:15:00
· 把brother写成bother,而且哥哥和本人不是一姓,哥哥不算家里人,不然,七大姑八大舅都来了


